Elsa, Lost and Found

It's been a heck of a test and learning experience for me. Figuring out how all the event triggers work and getting the story to operate was great. She can remember you. You just have to figure out how to restore her memory. And that one I won't tell you.

Brad was her ex from long before user. Also a reference to GTA 5 Brad Snider. He's part of Boston's Snow Hill organized crime element. A reference to Fallout 4's Winter Hill crime family.

There's a reason why it has the paranormal tag. 😀 i love that you're asking questions. I have the main plot which I thought was dull. In the digital age, figuring that stuff out is easy. So I added 3 side stories. All of them fit together but none of them neatly. Then I tossed in two shovels worth of easter eggs. This way, you can play the story more than once and get a different out come. I can explain it if you'd like.

What U could easily have done is, forget the amnesia. The letter thing works is if she was forced to fake her death and she sent a letter saying help. I then go finding her and (story goes from there) From Ur comments on others, I understand what Ur saying but the Amnesia makes zero sense right from the start.

Oops!

OK, so I just looked and it was a different person. I wasn’t you. But you should collect a bunch of my characters, cause they’re really good lol

Yeah I agree. There's way too much going on. This wouldn't be right for a TV show of adding a letter saying come find her? Man, how can U say that if she doesn't recognise U?

How do you mean my friend?

Google Arkham Massachusetts. 😀 I used the accident to explain the closed casket need. Brad is a reference to GTA 5's Brad Synder. I needed a time jump and if I left Brad (Eric in my first draft) he would SA (something I won't have in my stories) her, so I killed him and put him in her coffin. Then I neeced to explain all that so I made him Brad, and had his criminal contacts kill him over stuff he stole. They kept her alive and stashed her here in case she remembers where Brad put the loot.

Yep lots of moving parts in this one. A core story and 3 stories plus easter a bunch of easter eggs.

Poly has trouble eith time keeping. But you being missing from her memory is intentional from the memory loss build. Part of Brad's plan and a element from the theme build. He used the car wreck as cover, and the paranormal element as the way to inflict the memory loss. I'm a subscriber, and I love your work. Your wife and her college friend was well done and I just played the your clingly wife isn't being clingy anymore.

Good catch. I had a note in there about it being a closed casket affair, but I must of edited it out. Put it the intro section. I'll bet I meant to move it. Thank you. 😊

I'll try and edit things so PB carries more of the load and players' memory doesn't have to carry as much.